A small but significant problem

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A small but significant problem

Postby Ringading on Sat Apr 09, 2005 10:07 pm

Sometimes in this comic there has been speech where somebody makes a terse remark and somebody responds at great length, and at these times the initial remark tends to be placed too low to take precedent in the reader's eyes. In the last couple of comics, for instance, Dot has asked "what's on?" but Casey's response dominates the panels so thoroughly that I don't notice her question until I've read the answer. It doesn't help that the first comment is situated below the second comment. A little shifting of the speech placement may be in order.
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