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Postby Consul on Mon Apr 30, 2001 7:08 am

Okay, I want to start an Anime poetry thread. Post your original poems here!<P>*ahem*<P><B>There once was a girl named Lum
Who drank back twenty-six shots of rum
They kept on getting tossed
She got thoroughly sauced
Until she could no longer...</B><P>Umm, nevermind. Forget I said anything. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/biggrin.gif"><P>Anyway, I think you get the idea. And to apologize for that example, here's another Urusei Yatsura themed poem, in free verse.<P>-----<P>Flying<P>Flying high is she
She in the tiger-striped bikini<P>Fly
Into the sky<P>And if I
Were to place
Each
Word
On
Its
Own
Line
I
Could
Then
Call
It
Art<P>And you would worship me
As I worship her<P>She in the tiger-striped bikini<P>-----<P>Actually, I think my first one was better. Anyway, you give it a try now.<P>Talk to you soon!<P>-<I>Consul, who is a little too addicted to cute green-haired horny (erm, horned) girls in scanty clothes.</I><P>(Edited to fix a typo and add a joke)
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Postby Strangeone on Mon Apr 30, 2001 7:17 am

An Ode To Trigun<P>What was that loud crash?<P>Oh my God! Look out, it's Vash!<P>Grab him so that we may earn lots of cash!<P>Three hours later, the entire town was trashed.<P>This whole episode gave Meryl a rash,<P>but hey, it didn't bother Milly a dash!
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Postby not damonk on Mon Apr 30, 2001 7:21 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Strangeone:
<B>An Ode To Trigun<P>What was that loud crash?<P>Oh my God! Look out, it's Vash!<P>Grab him so that we may earn lots of cash!<P>Three hours later, the entire town was trashed.<P>This whole episode gave Meryl a rash,<P>but hey, it didn't bother Milly a dash!</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>wicked! very well done!! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/biggrin.gif">
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Postby Consul on Mon Apr 30, 2001 7:23 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by not damonk:
<B> wicked! very well done!! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/biggrin.gif">
</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Why don't you try participating, !Damonk? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/wink.gif">
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Postby Strangeone on Mon Apr 30, 2001 7:31 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by not damonk:
<B> wicked! very well done!! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/biggrin.gif"></B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Thank you, thank you! I'll be here all week, be sure to tip your waitress!<P>
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Postby Sterling on Tue May 01, 2001 4:13 am

I'd attempt one for Excel saga, but I suck at poetry and its impossible to get across the sheer hyperactivity through a forum. Gomen.<P>Those other ones are good, though. Especially the Trigun one!<P>------------------
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Postby lostfactor on Tue May 01, 2001 6:02 am

I'd do something about <cite>Tendo no Escaflowne</cite>, but the only thing I can think of involves Alan's sister and something that rhymes with "Venus"... <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/wink.gif">
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Postby Elim Stone on Sun May 13, 2001 11:02 am

Well, Nice limericks guys!
How about some more seious poetry:<P>Vision of Escaflowne poem (and no words that rhyme with 'Venus' =p )
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Hitomi stands amidst a war
Casts her cards upon the floor
And longs to love a man<P>But which man she can't decide
So her feelings she will hide
Assuming that she can<P>For Van her rash heart sings aloud
Those glorious wings, strong and proud
Stir thoughts within her mind<P>Of Alan Schezar, never does she tire
He plays her heartstrings like a lyre
And is courteous and kind<P>But Alan can't make up his mind
Van, by kingly duty he is blind
And Amano isn't here<P>So now she sits up in her room
Thinks about approaching doom
And softly sheds a tear
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Postby Strangeone on Sun May 13, 2001 11:05 am

Dude, that's a great one. I remember when I saw the series for the first time. The show shall remain a classic.
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Postby Elim Stone on Sun May 13, 2001 11:27 am

Thank you. I actually haven't seen the whole series yet; I'm impatiently counting the 23 days until the last 2 DVDs are released. *grins*
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Postby Strangeone on Sun May 13, 2001 11:58 am

I actually first saw the series last summer after purchasing the entire subtitled VHS box set. The series is a real heart wrencher. Coincidentally, I received the series the same week that the Fox network began airing Escaflowne in the kids slot. By the way, do not watch the edited version. It's sacriledge.
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