Aspects. Ch 15 (Forum Fiction) Updated 1/15/08

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Postby Sanchay on Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:02 am

I wants more plz! The story is so coolness and stuff! ^_^
DBZ Abridged wrote:Chichi: Did you have to carry a child around inside you for nine months with a husband that literally thought there were Cinnabons hidden in your shirt?!

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Postby Malachy19 on Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:05 am

*is glomped* Heh thanks again. I am glad you enjoy the writing and can get a feel of the world. Hope to continue to impress!
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Postby Malachy19 on Thu Mar 29, 2007 2:40 pm

Chapter 7: The Boy who Became a Knight

Rated A for Awkward silence


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Postby Kraggi on Thu Mar 29, 2007 4:35 pm

....Sway'tuh, says I.
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Postby AkaraAri on Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:05 pm

character development, moral dillemas......very nice ^-^
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Postby Drayco on Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:15 pm

I reeeeeeally need to draw the version of Drayco for this. Been a while since he's been in actual armor. The sword will be fun to draw too. Alchemical ubersword ftw.
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Postby FaweFC44 on Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:22 pm

I'd give you more than two thumbs up for this, but I only have two to give :(
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Postby Yun on Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:39 pm

The 10/Kum-El stuff was superb, but I think you went a little too long with the orihalcum stuff. The story seemed to drag a bit in the middle.
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Postby 10.0.0.1 on Thu Mar 29, 2007 11:31 pm

Indeed nice development, getting the history of Kum-El picking her flowers and her joining to stay with him is very nice.
And the end, wow. So much emotion, I love it, I absolutely love it.
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Postby Grim Atescu on Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:53 am

I need more... please, Mal, think of the Childgrims... Update more, please... We need it like we need air...
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Postby Malachy19 on Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:05 am

:D GLad you enjoyed it. And yes, Yun, I will have to agree with you. I don;t know what I was thinking when I went out on that random tangent, I'll try not to do it again.
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Postby Sqauto on Fri Mar 30, 2007 10:02 am

Damn that is a great chapter mate.

You did a good job playing everyone off against each other when they talked.
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Postby A Fan on Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:48 am

Superb work, nothing I can say that hasn't been said already.

A professor? Why do I get the feeling that the lab's lighting will be faulty...
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Postby Malachy19 on Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:37 pm

A Fan wrote:Superb work, nothing I can say that hasn't been said already.

A professor? Why do I get the feeling that the lab's lighting will be faulty...


:shifty: It's a possibility
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Postby Drayco on Fri Mar 30, 2007 1:19 pm

A Fan wrote:Superb work, nothing I can say that hasn't been said already.

A professor? Why do I get the feeling that the lab's lighting will be faulty...


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A Professor... the lab has to have random upbeat music playing in the background. Like really upbeat elevator music.

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Postby A Fan on Fri Mar 30, 2007 6:38 pm

Actually, I was referring to Mssr. Tomoe as this professor. I daren't dream of filling as plot-advancing a role as an exposition-providing scientist.
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Postby Drayco on Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:16 pm

And I was making a joke on your post.

Or just being random. Or something.
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Postby Kyrio on Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:04 pm

Hey I found this thread while randomly searching my username in the keenspot forum search! I don't remember ever posting here, so I'm apparently mentioned, could someone tell me where? XD
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Postby Sqauto on Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:39 am

I would, but I'm too lazy.

So read them yourself. :P
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Postby Malachy19 on Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:01 am

Heheh I used you as a character in the forum fic. And I agree with Squato, read it to find yourself :D
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Postby Kyrio on Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:05 am

eeeh....fine. maybe when I have some time >.>

I prefer it if people tell me when I'm a character in a story XD otherwise I'll go on not knowing I have a cameo >.>
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Postby Malachy19 on Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:50 am

Heheh sorry! From now on I'll PM someone when they make a cameo :D
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Postby FaweFC44 on Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:58 am

In the words of the great and magnificent Fawe:


Give me more or give me death!
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Postby Malachy19 on Tue Apr 17, 2007 4:06 pm

Rated S for SECONDED

Chapter 8: The Dark Professor

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Postby 10.0.0.1 on Tue Apr 17, 2007 4:48 pm

I love ten's reaction to the professor, I would quote the best parts but I can't decide which part is the best.
I do however love the exit, dead on and hilarious.
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