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If crap is made by Atiln it's either here or at LP:BtR

Postby ed atiln on Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:53 pm

I made a comic, I probably shouldn't have.
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I fixed most of the typos, but I haven't posted the fixed ones, also Image Shack killed off one of them.
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Re: My Comic

Postby DrSimmons on Sat Oct 18, 2008 10:05 pm

Hah, nice. Some nice dialogue there. I'm really shit at dialogue. Check out my comic I started. It's on DA though. And Im not sure how to post images on here nor do I care. SO heres the first page: http://simmons2-0.deviantart.com/art/Page-1-99500695
I like the second to last one with the monologue. Nice :rootbeer:
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Re: My Comic

Postby Cheshy458 on Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:13 am

Oh Ed. That was an adventure to touch the emotions of our very souls.

Edit: Nice reference on page 7 there, Simmons.
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Re: My Comic

Postby DrSimmons on Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:22 am

Cheshy458 wrote: Edit: Nice reference on page 7 there, Simmons.

:) I'm glad there are people who appreciate the awesomeness of Space Tree. I was tempted to put "Mee From highschool" on page 4 but that wouldnt have made sense to people who hadnt seen ST, and Im actually handing this up as a school project so....jerks.

So Atiln, will we be detecting any more of these comics off the starboard bow any time soon?
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Re: My Comic

Postby Cheshy458 on Sun Oct 19, 2008 1:21 am

Who would have thought that people on the Space Tree forum would appreciate it?

Certainly not me. What the fuck is Space Tree?
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Re: My Comic

Postby DrSimmons on Sun Oct 19, 2008 1:38 am

This is the spacetree forum? Sweet.
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Re: My Comic

Postby Lone Wolf01 on Sun Oct 19, 2008 3:05 am

DrSimmons wrote:I was tempted to put "Mee From highschool" on page 3 but that wouldnt have made sense to people who hadnt seen ST,


You mean page 4?

Also, nice comics, atiln. I actually enjoyed them. Top work.
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Re: My Comic

Postby DrSimmons on Sun Oct 19, 2008 3:19 am

I said page 4. :smug:

Lone Wolf01 wrote: Oh, you're right. Top work funnyman.
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Re: My Comic

Postby ed atiln on Sun Oct 19, 2008 7:58 am

Ah, so DrSimmons is Lonewolf's friend, that explains it.
Nice comic Simmons, t'was a good read.

And yeah, I'll continue this thing. I'll try to make it into a daily updated webcomic for the masses, want to see what's going through the heads of people who those.
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Re: My Comic

Postby cheeselovingtree on Sun Oct 19, 2008 9:53 am

making fun of webcomic cliche is cliche :smug:
nah I kid, I liked reading it. 10 space points.
Same to you, simmons.
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Re: My Comic

Postby Cheshy458 on Sun Oct 19, 2008 11:34 am

Ding! Your internet penis just grew a quarter inch.
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Re: My Comic

Postby ed atiln on Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:28 pm

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Misanthropy is teh lulz!!1

Am I getting more experienced or losing freshness?
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Re: My Comic

Postby SoNegative on Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:45 pm

The last two sealed the deal for me. And since it they were the last two you've done thus far I'm prepared to say you're not a shallow puddle of humour. No, you're much more like a shallow pool.
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Re: My Comic

Postby Fulgrymm on Fri Oct 24, 2008 6:46 pm

of awesome?
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Re: My Comic

Postby DrSimmons on Fri Oct 24, 2008 10:29 pm

I would say that this is getting even better :D It's great stuff, especially that last one about the fourth wall :rootbeer: I'm assuming that the same character is always on the same side? Otherwise I can't really tell the difference.
Also, if anyone read it my comic is all up on dA now. 16 pages in all, black and white.
First page link again if you want to read it it: http://simmons2-0.deviantart.com/art/Page-1-99500695
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Re: My Comic

Postby MEKofTheMEKkingdom on Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:23 am

DrSimmons wrote:I would say that this is getting even better :D It's great stuff, especially that last one about the fourth wall :rootbeer: I'm assuming that the same character is always on the same side? Otherwise I can't really tell the difference.
Also, if anyone read it my comic is all up on dA now. 16 pages in all, black and white.
First page link again if you want to read it it: http://simmons2-0.deviantart.com/art/Page-1-99500695

Awesomatastic, also in other news, I have OVER NINE THOUSAAANNND DevArt views.
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Re: My Comic

Postby cheeselovingtree on Sat Oct 25, 2008 6:56 am

Another ST reference? You are good :smug:

Also Ed, first and second last were brilliant :smug: :smug:
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Re: My Comic

Postby ed atiln on Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:30 am

DrSimmons wrote:I would say that this is getting even better :D It's great stuff, especially that last one about the fourth wall :rootbeer: I'm assuming that the same character is always on the same side? Otherwise I can't really tell the difference.
Also, if anyone read it my comic is all up on dA now. 16 pages in all, black and white.
First page link again if you want to read it it: http://simmons2-0.deviantart.com/art/Page-1-99500695

I wish I had a cat to plot my robotic doom...
They're not really constant characters, but as people usually like one or the other one better, I suppose I'm doing in unconsciously.
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Re: My Comic

Postby cheeselovingtree on Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:28 pm

I just bought and played darwinia and multiwinia
This makes your characters more endearing
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Re: My Comic

Postby ed atiln on Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:00 pm

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Constructive criticism would be constructive. :smug:
And critical. :gonk:









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Re: My Comic

Postby DrSimmons on Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:18 am

Well first, I love the second one. And the first one! As for critisicm, I cant really say anything for the writing, Im no good at dialogue. And well to be honest I dont think your going to change the art style anytime soon, Im pretty sure you've got it down. As long as you keep getting dialogue its a winner.
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Re: My Comic

Postby ed atiln on Mon Jun 22, 2009 11:43 am

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Re: If crap is made by Atiln it's either here or at LP:BtR

Postby cheeselovingtree on Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:16 pm

tell me what that is before I download it
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