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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:02 am
by Sanchay
I wants more plz! The story is so coolness and stuff! ^_^

PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:05 am
by Malachy19
*is glomped* Heh thanks again. I am glad you enjoy the writing and can get a feel of the world. Hope to continue to impress!

PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 2:40 pm
by Malachy19
Chapter 7: The Boy who Became a Knight

Rated A for Awkward silence


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[b]Lumierre D

PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 4:35 pm
by Kraggi
....Sway'tuh, says I.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:05 pm
by AkaraAri
character development, moral dillemas......very nice ^-^

PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:15 pm
by Drayco
I reeeeeeally need to draw the version of Drayco for this. Been a while since he's been in actual armor. The sword will be fun to draw too. Alchemical ubersword ftw.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:22 pm
by FaweFC44
I'd give you more than two thumbs up for this, but I only have two to give :(

PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:39 pm
by Yun
The 10/Kum-El stuff was superb, but I think you went a little too long with the orihalcum stuff. The story seemed to drag a bit in the middle.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 11:31 pm
by 10.0.0.1
Indeed nice development, getting the history of Kum-El picking her flowers and her joining to stay with him is very nice.
And the end, wow. So much emotion, I love it, I absolutely love it.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:53 am
by Grim Atescu
I need more... please, Mal, think of the Childgrims... Update more, please... We need it like we need air...

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:05 am
by Malachy19
:D GLad you enjoyed it. And yes, Yun, I will have to agree with you. I don;t know what I was thinking when I went out on that random tangent, I'll try not to do it again.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 10:02 am
by Sqauto
Damn that is a great chapter mate.

You did a good job playing everyone off against each other when they talked.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:48 am
by A Fan
Superb work, nothing I can say that hasn't been said already.

A professor? Why do I get the feeling that the lab's lighting will be faulty...

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:37 pm
by Malachy19
A Fan wrote:Superb work, nothing I can say that hasn't been said already.

A professor? Why do I get the feeling that the lab's lighting will be faulty...


:shifty: It's a possibility

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 1:19 pm
by Drayco
A Fan wrote:Superb work, nothing I can say that hasn't been said already.

A professor? Why do I get the feeling that the lab's lighting will be faulty...


Ehehehehe...
A Professor... the lab has to have random upbeat music playing in the background. Like really upbeat elevator music.

And ProfessorTomoe has to be in the lab next door... which would perfectly explain why A Professor would be as quirky as I just know he will be. :3

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 6:38 pm
by A Fan
Actually, I was referring to Mssr. Tomoe as this professor. I daren't dream of filling as plot-advancing a role as an exposition-providing scientist.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:16 pm
by Drayco
And I was making a joke on your post.

Or just being random. Or something.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:04 pm
by Kyrio
Hey I found this thread while randomly searching my username in the keenspot forum search! I don't remember ever posting here, so I'm apparently mentioned, could someone tell me where? XD

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:39 am
by Sqauto
I would, but I'm too lazy.

So read them yourself. :P

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:01 am
by Malachy19
Heheh I used you as a character in the forum fic. And I agree with Squato, read it to find yourself :D

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:05 am
by Kyrio
eeeh....fine. maybe when I have some time >.>

I prefer it if people tell me when I'm a character in a story XD otherwise I'll go on not knowing I have a cameo >.>

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:50 am
by Malachy19
Heheh sorry! From now on I'll PM someone when they make a cameo :D

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 10:58 am
by FaweFC44
In the words of the great and magnificent Fawe:


Give me more or give me death!

PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 4:06 pm
by Malachy19
Rated S for SECONDED

Chapter 8: The Dark Professor

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[b]Lumierre D

PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 4:48 pm
by 10.0.0.1
I love ten's reaction to the professor, I would quote the best parts but I can't decide which part is the best.
I do however love the exit, dead on and hilarious.