Aspects. Ch 15 (Forum Fiction) Updated 1/15/08

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Postby Grim Atescu on Fri Dec 29, 2006 2:09 pm

Yay!

Unfortunately, I probably won't be premiering next chapter, now will I?
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Postby Malachy19 on Fri Dec 29, 2006 3:45 pm

Nope, definately not, hehe. Sorry.
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Postby Grim Atescu on Fri Dec 29, 2006 10:07 pm

Figured not. Still, keep asking and inevitably the answer will eventually be yes... if I'm in this one, of course.
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Postby Malachy19 on Thu Jan 04, 2007 4:49 pm

Chapter 5. Spider's Silk

Rated M for Machismo

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Port City, Merbis

Once again Hat found himself back in the bottom of the spiritual ladder, wading through the faithless filth of Merbis. Kylen had claimed he knew a pilot who would take them to Ausland. But anyone this lecherous little wolf knew, had to be the very bottom of society, possibly even a sky pirate. In fact, chances were this person, whoever he or she was, was a sky pirate. Oh well, it did not matter as long as they were able to get to Ausland.

Kylen led them through the filth to a bar that was seedy, at best. The priest looked up at the banner above the oaken door.
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Postby Drayco on Thu Jan 04, 2007 5:03 pm

Another chapter, and the awesomeness continues.

And yet, somehow this would be the place that the real Drayco would fit in better. Treasure Hunter Extraordinaire. ^^;
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Postby Grim Atescu on Thu Jan 04, 2007 8:25 pm

Ah, yes, a bar. ...Jeez, man, a bar, really, anyone knows that if you've got enough panache you hang out in a pub.

Anywho, 'nother good chapter, wish I was coming up soon so I can see your take on me, prob'ly won't happen for a good while, though.
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Postby KylenPhylar on Thu Jan 04, 2007 8:29 pm

Man...Hat needs to be hurt for that comment...I mean..Great chappy!
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Postby Atashi-Cloud on Thu Jan 04, 2007 10:11 pm

^^; hehe, love the story so far Mal....but since we've yet to see where everyone else might fit in(or not at all if I'm garnering hints from those who've asked to be included... :shifty: ) I'll just abstain from wanting to have Jodi included here...^^;

though if you request to put her in, I won't say no....
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Postby VOR on Thu Jan 04, 2007 10:23 pm

I love how everybody wants to be included. I've already BEEN included in a plot-generating role (I'm the evil emperor! I'm the evil emperor! La la la la LA!), so I'll instead say:

Congratulations on a well-written story, Mal. This most recent chapter isn't quite up to the standards the previous ones have set dramatically, but that's okay. The previous chapters were the hook to suck you in, this chapter's mostly setup for the coming plot. Exposition can be a bit less tense, and a bit more humorous than the suspenseful stuff of the previous chapters.

You've always been quite Final Fantasy-influenced, and I like that (DM's allegiance to Kefka made me chuckle), but "sky pirate"? ...I guess I'm biased, but still...I've always hated sky pirates...grrr...

Still, nice work. Keep it up, and don't feel TOO pressured by the thousands of adoring fans who all want a cameo. No, not you, Cameo. Just a cam...ah, you all know what I mean.
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Postby Atashi-Cloud on Thu Jan 04, 2007 10:31 pm

Yes we do VOR...though I will say that it was quite the pun you made there...^^; but yes, we do all want a piece of our cute little Came-o....

Jodi: *pops in*This silly advertisement for Came-Os partly made by Ferret and Squirrel Enterprises. All rights reserved, yaddayaddayaddayadda...say, FB, when do I get that free atomics set you promised me for doing this?
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Postby Malachy19 on Thu Jan 04, 2007 10:57 pm

VOR wrote:I love how everybody wants to be included. I've already BEEN included in a plot-generating role (I'm the evil emperor! I'm the evil emperor! La la la la LA!), so I'll instead say:

Congratulations on a well-written story, Mal. This most recent chapter isn't quite up to the standards the previous ones have set dramatically, but that's okay. The previous chapters were the hook to suck you in, this chapter's mostly setup for the coming plot. Exposition can be a bit less tense, and a bit more humorous than the suspenseful stuff of the previous chapters.

You've always been quite Final Fantasy-influenced, and I like that (DM's allegiance to Kefka made me chuckle), but "sky pirate"? ...I guess I'm biased, but still...I've always hated sky pirates...grrr...

Still, nice work. Keep it up, and don't feel TOO pressured by the thousands of adoring fans who all want a cameo. No, not you, Cameo. Just a cam...ah, you all know what I mean.


*nod* I must agree this chapter was sub-standard and I apologize. It was hard to get back into the feel of Aspects after the hiatus, especially when the next chapter was scripted to be a "fluff" chapter. It's purpose was Cammy, primarily. Showcasing her personality, her role as the comical catharsis of the group.

Heheh and I'm glad you like the Kefka refernce, I always thought it was funny. To be honest, DM actually came from a DnD game I played in that a friend of mine ran, in a FF VI setting. But anyway, I happen to love sky pirates, arrr! Hehehe....
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Postby Burningblood on Thu Jan 04, 2007 11:48 pm

I know I'm probably not going to end up in this story. So instead of asking for a part or something like that I'm going to say this.



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Postby Drayco on Thu Jan 04, 2007 11:49 pm

Sky pirates are still pirates. And dissing pirates within earshot of Drayco is a bad idea.

*Drayco is seen in background sailing through the sky on his rarely seen White Wind ship*

Er, right, too busy being a pirate to notice. Carry on... wait, one more thing... where is it...
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Postby Atashi-Cloud on Thu Jan 04, 2007 11:55 pm

Great....yet another who thinks that Luffy D. Monkey is a valuable source for piratey jokes....>< seriously, only one Pirate ranks among the most amusing and that is. Jack Spa--

Jodi: *interrupting* Captain...

*sighs* Captain...Jack Sparrow!
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Postby clawlikedragon on Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:01 am

I dri~hic~nk to this story... seriously, I am drniking, but's only water.
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Postby Drayco on Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:02 am

*interrupted at the same time as Jodi, for the same reason* ^^;

Never actually seen One Piece, no idea where the tuna cutlass joke came from, just saw it the other day on someone's dA site.

*off in the back*
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Postby Atashi-Cloud on Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:06 am

Jodi: *fires a TG+Vix blast at Drayco, then teleports out*

*facepalms*Jodi...turn him into a vixen after making fun of his piratey-nees...
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Postby clawlikedragon on Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:12 am

*Takes out mirror shield* DON'T ZAP ME.
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Postby Drayco on Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:16 am

Drayco:
*blinkblink*
*looks down*
"Oh, f***ing hell. Why have I been foxy-boobified!"
*growls, then thinks for a moment and runs off into the captain's cabin*

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"Okay, now I gotta admit, this looks pretty cool."
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Postby clawlikedragon on Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:59 am

MORTAL DRAW *Unsheathes sword and kills the nearby speaker of 1337 in the same movement*
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Postby Sqauto on Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:22 am

Drayco wrote:Drayco:
*blinkblink*
*looks down*
"Oh, f***ing hell. Why have I been foxy-boobified!"
*growls, then thinks for a moment and runs off into the captain's cabin*

*comes back a moment later in full red pirates jacket, which conveniently enough is also mageweave and conforms to the new physique*
"Okay, now I gotta admit, this looks pretty cool."


Oh for DA to be working so I could link an image of that. :P

Anyway, this is a good little chapter Mal. Like you said, not your best. But you did a good job making it interesting.
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Postby Kum-El on Fri Jan 05, 2007 3:16 am

I've said it before, and I'll say it again...

MOOOOOORE!
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Postby A Fan on Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:44 am

Hmm. I wonder...
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Postby Drayco on Sun Jan 07, 2007 8:58 am

No contest. Drayco's a ninja and a pirate. :3
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Postby Sqauto on Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:27 am

Would he be a Vixen there also like in another thread. ;)
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