Aspects. Ch 15 (Forum Fiction) Updated 1/15/08

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Aspects. Ch 15 (Forum Fiction) Updated 1/15/08

Postby Malachy19 on Mon Nov 13, 2006 9:14 pm

This idea was brought about by Ting Yi. As a present to all my friends here in Mayhem, I will write a story. However, I am extremely lazy and have a short attention span, so I'm going to release it in chunks. :D I hope you enjoy it.
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Postby Malachy19 on Mon Nov 13, 2006 9:15 pm

Part I: Prelude to War

Chapter 1: The Black Blood

Rated Z for Zombies


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Ralmondra-Drusyria Northern Border, the Jagged Teeth


In the northern border of the Ralmondra Kingdom lies the Jagged Teeth, a mountain range comprising of ravines, peaks, and fierce winds and gales. No better barrier has ever been created, by man or by gods, and it was this reason that the Kingdom of Ralmondra left only sparse outposts along its border. Even the land itself, leading up to the Jagged Teeth seemed cursed, blackened and unable to support life. And it was along this border that the small frontier village of Jerrelum was located.

Saying Jerrelum was poor would be a gross understatement. In fact, a better description of the village, would to call it a festering wart upon the surface of the Goddess blessed planet. The people were aching, blistered, and the vast majority of them inflicted with the Slow Death, a horrendous affliction that would pale your skin, thin your hair and brittle your bones, until finally, over the course of years, your internal organs would slowly shut off, one by one.

It was in this blistering puss of civilization that King Friis of Ralmondra had sent his top scholar, lady Ten as well as his greatest fighter, Kum-El to investigate the area. There had been a disturbing lack of communication as of late from the northern outposts. In addition to that, some eyewitness reports have mentioned a strange black cloud spreading across the area, enveloping the land like a cancer.

Kum-El and Ten flew towards the northlands in the female scholar
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Postby VOR on Mon Nov 13, 2006 11:01 pm

...me likey, Mal. Me likey very very much! Keep this thing up, provided you can keep up the same level of quality.
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Postby Kum-El on Mon Nov 13, 2006 11:04 pm

Spot on characterization of Kum-El Mal.

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Postby Grim Atescu on Mon Nov 13, 2006 11:31 pm

More! I wanna know what everyone else turns out to be!
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Postby VOR on Mon Nov 13, 2006 11:38 pm

Let's look at the data:

1. Exposure to this black slime seems to cause death/animation.
2. Those killed/animated? by the slime initiate violent action, prompting attacks against them.
3. Those killed/animated? by the slime bleed more of it when attacked.
4. At least one individual exposed directly to the slime is now flying towards a national capital.



...yeeeah, this is gonna get nasty. Which makes me very very happy.
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Postby Cameo on Mon Nov 13, 2006 11:58 pm

Grim Atescu wrote:More! I wanna know what everyone else turns out to be!

SECONDED!
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Postby clawlikedragon on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:45 am

I also support Grim's statement.
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Postby TingYi on Tue Nov 14, 2006 6:57 am

I love Frankie M. The Fourth! And Mal too! ^_~ OoH! Looks like I had a good idea for once! Yay for me!
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Postby Atashi-Cloud on Tue Nov 14, 2006 7:13 am

^^ Great Fic, Malachy. Now I'm tempted to go over my old one and re-do most of it so we have more to read....at least, in oldie-style stuff...my fic is way too old to even personify the recent Atashi.^^;
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Postby 10.0.0.1 on Tue Nov 14, 2006 8:26 am

I love it, Ten's obvious crush on Kum-El so perfect.
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Postby OzLionHeart on Tue Nov 14, 2006 8:32 am

Cameo wrote:
Grim Atescu wrote:More! I wanna know what everyone else turns out to be!

SECONDED!


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Postby Avenara on Tue Nov 14, 2006 9:38 am

OH SHIT! MAL I DEMAND THE NEXT BLOODY CHAPTER IMMEDIATELY! *points and sits him down to type* NOW NOW NOW! ;.;
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Postby Malachy19 on Tue Nov 14, 2006 10:59 am

:oops: Thank you everyone, I didn't think this little thing would be so well recieved. I'll do my best to keep to a chapter-a-week update schelduel. Thank you very much for your support :D
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Postby Burningblood on Tue Nov 14, 2006 2:44 pm

Awesome! Another cool forum based story that I won't be included in. Sweet, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Postby Dayantis on Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:10 pm

Wow. It's good! :D 8)
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Postby zerras on Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:31 pm

ooOooOOoOOOooooooooOOO.....nice! :lol:
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Postby Piebunny on Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:43 pm

And another story joins the ranks of Ed Bunny and Heroes of Mayhem. Can't wait for the next bit.
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Postby Atashi-Cloud on Tue Nov 14, 2006 8:39 pm

^^ I think Malachy is a hit with everyone here...well, I'd echo everyone else, but I think saying it too much will jinx ya.
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Postby Malachy19 on Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:12 pm

Chapter 2. Visions

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Postby Grim Atescu on Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:16 pm

Yet another astounding chapter. So we see the supposedly eternal conflict between Science and Religion here... and lo, magic factors in as well! How wonderful! ...Too bad Hat's able to see, otherwise I'd call him a Gurgan.
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Postby ChroniclerC on Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:25 pm

Science... Religion... It's all good; they both pay just as well. As long as there is a story to tell (and beautifull ladies to tell it to :wink: ).
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Postby Grim Atescu on Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:31 pm

Y'know, religion is actually the cause of most early science... So they're not especially enemies. :P
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Postby Atashi-Cloud on Sat Nov 18, 2006 10:59 pm

^^ I looove this, Malachy. I'm hoping somewhere we get to see whom else will appear on said journey(I'm hoping Atashi, Jodi and Myst make an appearance...^^; ).

and just to beat Kum-El to the punchline...

MOOOORE! :D
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Postby Kum-El on Sat Nov 18, 2006 11:11 pm

Well, Atashi's already said it, but that doesn't mean I can't say it too, so...

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