Slalom Story Version 2

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Slalom Story Version 2

Postby Shortyland05 on Fri May 29, 2009 11:16 pm

Yes I know the previous one fell off the face of the earth... but now that we have more active members I reckon we should kick it off again.

What happens is that I write a paragraph, like a description of a place or something, and then the next poster will post another paragraph continuing on from the previous poster. Thus it will be creating a story one paragraph at a time.

RULES:
- Try to stick with the story going on currently, try not to go on a major tangent in one post.
- No killing off characters because you dont like them, there must be a very important reason or else this story will get very boring very fast
- No outrageous random shit, like for example "THEN CHUCK NORRIS ROUNDHOUSE KICKED HIM, TEH END!!111"
- Paragraphs can be big or small, just dont make em 2 liners :)
- Doesnt have to be about Zebra Girl, but if the forumers want it too then it shall by writing it into their paragraph

Now lets get writing :D

The air was thick with smoke as the fires burned. The sound of creaks and colapsing beams mixed in with the roar of the fire created an atmosphere or panic and fear. Alice, who was trapped in the burning Apartment building, was in the corner trying to scream for help whilst trying not to breath in the toxic smoke. With death certain she crawled over to her bedside drawers, trying not to get too near the walls, and attemted to hold the picture frame containing the photo of her lovely daughter. It seared her hand, causing her to throw it onto the ground. Over come with grief and fear she grabbed the photo from the now smashed frame disregarding the broken glass cutting her hands. As she clutched it to her heart she tried to sob only to cough and hack from the smoke that had now filled the room. Giving up on life she simply laid down onto the floor, hoping that her daughter will be ok, that there will always be someone there to look after her.
BURN, JACK, BURN!
*This is not a subliminal message*
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Re: Slalom Story Version 2

Postby Omeg@ on Sat May 30, 2009 12:41 am

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The sounds of desperate rescue workers caught Alice, but she could barely understood what they were saying. "Oh god, please, let Jane be alright" she thought within her mind. Her mouth was very dry now, too dry to even cough properly. Her night dress caught on fire and the flames burned her flesh. The agony was now all she could think about. Her blood started to boil and bones began to break from the heat. As if some supernatural sign of mercy, a heavy support beam fell on her, ending the short, but intense suffering for good.
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Re: Slalom Story Version 2

Postby Shortyland05 on Sat May 30, 2009 4:20 pm

"EVERYONE GET OUT NOW!" Yelled out the lead fireman, "THIS PLACE IS GOING TO FALL DOWN! OUT! NOW!" Even with the roar of flames and the snapping noise of the building around them they could all hear Rob. As they turned to get back to the stairs they heard a giant 'SNAP' from above them. From their training they knew that something was going to fall through the building, and on instinct they dashed forward. But it was too little too late for the newest member of the fire department, who was instantly crushed by the falling support beam. The rest stood in shock for a full second before realising that they still had to get out of there. "COME ON! WE STILL NEED TO GET OUT!" Rob said, the now 4 fully clad firemen dressed in yellow flame proof suits with heavy oxygen tanks on their backs tried to run to the fire escapes knowing that the stairs would be useless. As the flames now licked their suits they didnt know whether they would get out, only to be rewarded by an open window and an operable fire excape on the side of the building.
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