General Fanwork Thread

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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby nagwam on Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:14 am

The new update for Chronicles of a Demon is up, and I'm really proud of this one. I'm trying out a couple of characters that I've had sitting on the back-burner for a couple of years now, and included a history of one of them to incorperate him into the ZG universe. Please comment, and let me know what you think!
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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Kubrick on Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:29 pm

Ah, the things we work on when we should be working on something else. Experimenting both with a Wacam Tablet and different art styles. Whether those experiments were successful or not is up to you. Enjoy, eh?


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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Kubrick on Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:43 pm

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A ZG signature.

Coloring by me. Tracing was used, but to be fair, I combined two drawings into one. Belly, horns, stomach, and hands entirely by me.
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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Kubrick on Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:34 pm

By the way, the above image is going to be the first panel of a fan comic, if I get around to it.
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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Kubrick on Wed Oct 28, 2009 9:20 pm

Nobody posts in this topic any more....
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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Omeg@ on Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:38 pm

Kubrick wrote:Nobody posts in this topic any more....

The forum itself has quiet down a bit, but that doesn't mean that you'll have to do a monoloque.

To be honest, I don't really like your art that much, though it may be better than mine at the moment. I'd suggest you trying more shading. Now the colors stand out from each other too much. You have a good amount of details, but the basic lines are a bit too carelessly made (or look that way). This might, ofcourse, be part of your style, but it does not appeal to my taste. I don't want to bring down your hopes and dreams, but to help you improve yourself. Try out more techniques and tune your styles.

You're doing a fan comic? That's cool. One more update for us to feast upon. It doesn't really matter if the art is good or not. Wihtout a solid storytelling and a good plot no comic can prevail.

Edit: I think that the sig you made is a bit too big. A rule of thumb on this subject is that if the signature is eating more space than your avarage post, it's too big.
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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Kubrick on Tue Nov 10, 2009 10:39 pm

I appreciate the comments.

Didn't mean to post so much.

The "Sig" is actually lifted from the first panel of the comic I'm working on (sporadically, admittedly, but it'll get done). I'm playing around with different styles. Drastically improving with every piece.
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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Kubrick on Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:36 pm

So, yeah. Finished version. Likely people saw the link on the front page. Missed deadline by a day (Aargh!).

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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Omeg@ on Sun Nov 29, 2009 12:40 pm

*The script is ok
*Art is "meh"
*Compared to the vast majority of fan art, is above the average.
*I like the colors.

Do you want me to be more spesific?
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Re: General Fanwork Thread

Postby Kubrick on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:52 pm

I'm just happy to have someone take a look and comment on it. :D

Also happy to have graduated from "below-average fan art" to "above-average fan art". :lol:
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