Walky Haikus?

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Postby bunnyThor on Sat Mar 30, 2002 10:12 pm

Funny.
The last time when I did four-word haikus and limericks on the Four-Words thread everybody went "Oh, no, dude! Too totally hard! Bummer!" And now here we are again, and everybody's doing it.
I guess I'm just ahead of my time.

But enough about my rough life...

Dave eats the Smarties
Turns into Walky again.
It's quite sad really.
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Postby Arrus on Sat Mar 30, 2002 10:30 pm

You all must recall
Haikus have strange syllables.
Five, seven, then five.
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Postby Dusty on Sat Mar 30, 2002 10:44 pm

I do not recall
Anything that I do not
Want to remember.

Haikus with four words
In each particular line?
I rather like that.
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Postby NR Pax on Sun Mar 31, 2002 4:32 am

Truly, four words/line
Intriguing challenge for me
Good brain workout here

But poor, poor Dina
Walky is Walky again
I almost feel bad
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Postby yearginsm on Sun Mar 31, 2002 12:41 pm

I wonder about Danny
How is he doing?
Life isn't all bad
He lives in Colorado

Sal and Danny together
They were so right
Are they really through?
But Billie, she's cool
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Postby bunnyThor on Sun Mar 31, 2002 1:24 pm

On 2002-03-31 12:41, yearginsm wrote:
I wonder about Danny
How is he doing?
Life isn't all bad
He lives in Colorado

Sal and Danny together
They were so right
Are they really through?
But Billie, she's cool


All I gotta say
About the above posting
Is your haikus suck.
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Postby NR Pax on Sun Mar 31, 2002 2:11 pm

Well his pattern is
Something completely diffrent
But name escapes me

Beef is my idol
Deep meaning but says little
Grunt grunt grunt grunt grunt
Only a fool sees hardship as just wages for being different.
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Postby Arrus on Sun Mar 31, 2002 4:44 pm

It is not haiku
Containing an extra line.
Three lines, ok guy?
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Postby Arrus on Wed Apr 03, 2002 6:52 pm

Hey folks, recall this?
That's correct! Lovely haikus!
Come on, they're nifty!
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Postby bunnyThor on Sun Jan 02, 2005 2:25 am

Arrus is long gone.
It's Walky! is completed.
Ghosts haunt this forum.

:o 8) :o
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Postby Skane on Sat Jan 08, 2005 12:59 am

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Postby bunnyThor on Sat Jan 08, 2005 8:07 pm

Skane so oft forgets--
One finger villifies me;
Three fingers point back.
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Postby Unknowner on Thu Jan 13, 2005 5:04 pm

Spicy chip of life
It cascades down my gullet
Mmm. Nachitos good.

But middle of night
I wake up, groaning loudly
For I have heartburn

___________________

Joe is in his room
I know better than to go
Hearing muffled moans

Put on my headphones
Listen to old rock music
Ignore. It is bliss.

__________________

Alien attack
Smallish and purple villains
I squish underfoot

But what is this now?
Giant brown and angry bot
Monkey Master's here

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Take a swig of beer
And laugh with other SEMMEs
Walky's on the floor.


That's all I got for now...
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we have cookies and punch!

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Postby bunnyThor on Sat Jan 15, 2005 3:53 pm

(Good effort there, but these are extra-special haikus. Not only do you have your normal 5-7-5 pattern, but these are also exactly four words per line. A tradition on this thread dating back to March of '02.)

Jason has Sal now.
He's experienced her hungers--
Mostly for junk food.

Roomies runs once more
Willis digs the pre-evolved?
Grown up they aren't.
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Postby Skane on Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:01 am

It was so tragic
That Diana has perished
Many weep for her
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Postby GlitterFey on Sun Jan 16, 2005 8:47 am

I have a question
Who the hell is Diana?
Maybe it's Dina?

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Postby Nick 101 on Sun Jan 16, 2005 5:58 pm

Yep, it is Dina.
Skane added a syllable.
Can we share a laugh?
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Postby bunnyThor on Mon Jan 17, 2005 7:47 pm

Four words ev'ry line.
Five-seven-five syllables.
Those are our strictures.

Don't believe me here?
It's for more complexity.
Peruse up this thread.
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Postby GlitterFey on Mon Jan 17, 2005 8:28 pm

Yes, I read above
And saw some discordity
Not all here agreed

But I am sorry
About causing waves here
With only three words

Dissent was small here
The majority wants four
And four they'll receive
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Postby Skane on Sat Jan 22, 2005 3:00 am

GlitterFey wrote:I have a question
Who the hell is Diana?
Maybe it's Dina?

:lol:

Doh, I am ashamed
Much confusion within me
Mixed up two comics
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Postby bunnyThor on Sun Jan 30, 2005 1:21 pm

Robin works with toys?
Her superpowers not used?
What is David's plan?
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Postby Skane on Wed Feb 02, 2005 4:59 am

Shortpack to ease pain
Of long suffering readers
Then back to carnage
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Postby bunnyThor on Sat Feb 05, 2005 9:54 pm

Jason is The Man.
Hunting aliens full time--
trouser crease still sharp. 8)
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Postby Skane on Sun Feb 06, 2005 1:57 am

Walky should just die
Let other characters shine
Sal gives enough angst
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Postby greyhairedkid on Mon Feb 07, 2005 5:38 pm

SEMME fights Martians.
Striped heroes die horribly.
Then... happy ending.
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