Original strip concept for 3/17

It's MEN IN BLACK meets DAWSON'S CREEK!

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Postby Walky on Fri Mar 16, 2001 9:44 am

<A HREF="http://www.itswalky.com/0317reject.gif" TARGET=_blank>http://www.itswalky.com/0317reject.gif</A> <P>Discuss.<P>--David
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Postby Regault on Fri Mar 16, 2001 9:51 am

Both of the strip ideas are wrong on so many levels.<P>One has the concept of carrying on a conversation with Willy One-Eye, one involves Joyce developing skills she shouldn't have.
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Postby bunnyThor on Fri Mar 16, 2001 10:04 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Walky:
<B> <A HREF="http://www.itswalky.com/0317reject.gif" TARGET=_blank>http://www.itswalky.com/0317reject.gif</A> <P>Discuss.
</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Aww, man.
That just blows.<P>
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Postby Brian on Fri Mar 16, 2001 10:37 am

DAMN, that would have been funny! Risky, yes. Controversial, of course. But DAMN. <P>-------------------------------------------<P>Think alien abduction would be cool? You're forgetting about the anal probing.<P>-Hapless Joe
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Postby Coota on Sat Mar 17, 2001 2:08 am

After extensive studying, I think Walky4 actually says:<P>"...loose train of thought" with lose misspelled. <P>And it still wierds me out... Joyce pulling a Monica... ungggggh...<P>------------------
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Postby ckern on Sat Mar 17, 2001 3:35 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Coota:
<B>After extensive studying, I think Walky4 actually says:<P>"...loose train of thought" with lose misspelled. <P>And it still wierds me out... Joyce pulling a Monica... ungggggh...
</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>That makes more sense than "judge", but I don't quite see it. I think we need an authoritative answer <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/smile.gif"><P>-Chris
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Postby Itlandm on Sat Mar 17, 2001 4:22 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Walky:
<B> <A HREF="http://www.itswalky.com/0317reject.gif" TARGET=_blank>http://www.itswalky.com/0317reject.gif</A> <P>Discuss.<P>--David</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Well, at least it isn't very graphic. I doubt a truly innocent person would know what was going on in the last three panels ... I am not too sure myself. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/smile.gif"><P>------------------
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Postby TheBlackCupid on Sat Mar 17, 2001 4:56 am

Thar she blows!<P>The fact David considered using the above strip at all only affirms the fact that this is <I>not</I> the real Joyce.<P>------------------
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Postby Guest on Sat Mar 17, 2001 6:26 am

Roight tasty Gov'nah!
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Postby Guest on Sat Mar 17, 2001 7:19 am

My two bits:<P>1) Okay, off with it.<P>2) Jeez, I'm gettin' smothered here!<P>3) Things are goin' by too fast to think...<P>4)Omigosh, omigosh, what do I do?<P>5) This aint kosher! I need time to...<P>Final Panel) ..Lose train of thought...<P>(I also saw judge and loose in there but
I think they were writeovers, changes of thought, misspellings, etc.)
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Postby ckern on Sat Mar 17, 2001 8:15 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Walky:
<B> <A HREF="http://www.itswalky.com/0317reject.gif" TARGET=_blank>http://www.itswalky.com/0317reject.gif</A> <P>Discuss.<P>--David</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>There's no reason why this can't be the Monday strip. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/smile.gif"><P>-Chris
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Postby Guest on Sat Mar 17, 2001 8:18 am

It's funny and well-scripted, but it's probably a good thing you decided to drop it.<P>Not because it's controversial, but because it's just not Walky.
He's too shy and nervous to ask Joyce out, but he'll stick around for oral sex?
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Postby Walky on Sat Mar 17, 2001 8:36 am

It's "lose train of thought," yes.<P>And I think it's in character for Walky -- he was just, um, a spectator there. He was in over his head (bad pun) and...<P>Okay, okay. It's all a bunch of bull.<P>I like the one I ended up going with better, so that's all that matters. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/smile.gif">
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Postby Brian on Sat Mar 17, 2001 9:00 am

Come on, Dave. You and I both know that is not a spectators sport. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/wink.gif"><P>--------------------------------------------<P>Think alien abduction would be cool? You're forgetting about the anal probing.<P>-Hapless Joe
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Postby Coota on Sat Mar 17, 2001 9:02 am

What scares the hell out of me is not knowing whether this is a joke or not. I mean, if this was actually what Walky was thinking about using, then that means he actually intends to have Joyce go through with the sexengs. <P>That would be crazy. <P>------------------
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Postby bunnyThor on Sat Mar 17, 2001 11:06 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by DavidMcGuire:
<B>It's funny and well-scripted, but it's probably a good thing you decided to drop it.<P>Not because it's controversial, but because it's just not Walky.
He's too shy and nervous to ask Joyce out, but he'll stick around for oral sex?</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>It would be impolite if he left, and it might hurt her feelings.<P>
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Postby ckern on Sat Mar 17, 2001 12:57 pm

In case people are having trouble reading the dialogue, this is what I make it out to be:<P>Panel 1 -
Joyce: "Okay, off with it"
Panel 2 -
Walky: "Jeez, I'm gettin' smothered here! Things are goin' by too fast to think!..."
Panel 3 -
Walky: "Omigosh, omigosh, what do I do? This ain't kosher! I need time to --"
Panel 4 -
Walky: "-- judge, train of thought..." (this last panel is very difficult to make out, but I think that's what it says)<P>-Chris
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Postby Guest on Sun Mar 18, 2001 1:27 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by K. Ivan Ruppert:
<B> Ahhh, but what if they're into that sorta thing? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/wink.gif"></B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>H4! Walky as a voyeur at its worst. That'd explain a lot about not asking Joyce out though. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/wink.gif"><P>------------------
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Postby Guest on Sun Mar 18, 2001 6:35 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by K. Ivan Ruppert:
<B> If you can stop a girl who've you've wanted for some time after she gets her lips around your wang, you're a better man than I, Dave ;)</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Actually, I have an oral sex phobia.
What if the girl sneezes in the middle of it?
Ouch! I would have to pee sitting down for the rest of my life.
Besides, the thought of sperm in someone's mouth activates my gag reflex.
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Postby Aeire on Sun Mar 18, 2001 8:53 am

*sweet smile*<P>One word. <P>CHOMP!!!!!!<P>*girlish teehee, scampers away*<P>
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Postby Brian on Sun Mar 18, 2001 9:52 am

CHOMP? You mean girls LIKE blood gushing into their mouth and a chunk of CENCORED?
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Postby EteRock on Sun Mar 18, 2001 10:05 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Aeire:
<B>*sweet smile*<P>One word. <P>CHOMP!!!!!!<P>*girlish teehee, scampers away*<P></B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>one word<P>Ouch!<P>------------------
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<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Aeire:
<B>CHOMP!!!!!!<P>*girlish teehee, scampers away*</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Arghh!! Thanks a lot! Now I'm going to have night-mares.
I almost wish I was a girl so I wouldn't feel threatened by that.
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Postby K. Ivan Ruppert on Sun Mar 18, 2001 12:32 pm

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by DavidMcGuire:
<B>Not because it's controversial, but because it's just not Walky.
He's too shy and nervous to ask Joyce out, but he'll stick around for oral sex?</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>If you can stop a girl who've you've wanted for some time after she gets her lips around your wang, you're a better man than I, Dave <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/wink.gif"><P>-K
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