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Postby pixel on Wed Nov 29, 2000 3:16 am

what do y'all think of this whole flash back sequence, anyway?<P>------------------
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Postby Jinx von Pseudonym on Wed Nov 29, 2000 3:53 am

I don't know why I chose the arrow icon.<P>I don't see the anime influence you mentioned in today's (American 11/29/00, otherwise 29/11/00, or whoever uses whichever) news. That's not a criticism, or for that matter a compliment; just a comment.<P>The transition was rather jarring, even with the disappearance in between the Cyn-Eric arc and the flashback. If you did that on purpose to heighten the suspense and keep people coming back to find out what happened with the aforementioned story arc, I commend you. If not, I think this isn't the best time to bring in the flashback; like I said, too many loose ends from the last arc. Plus, the transition from the Snickers strip to the flashback was a bit too subtle; I just now made the connection, though Jinx brain may am slow. The comments about grade school and Junior High, etc. didn't stand out enough, and certainly didn't seem to foreshadow the flashback enough.<P>As for the quality of the flashback itself, it's too early to say. Ask me again after a few more strips.<P>---
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Postby janet weiss on Thu Nov 30, 2000 12:30 pm

i think tis quite good actually.. so far. if the climax is worth it, it'll have worked for me <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/biggrin.gif">
i got the link between the school comments.. sorry jinx, heh, you're slow!<P>an' the anime style works and is cute
for young kirb, kara, and erik but i dunno how it'll look for the normal comic <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/biggrin.gif">
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Postby DaFalcon on Fri Dec 15, 2000 12:12 pm

Flashback was good -- and not tooo long that we don't ever get to find out what happens next :-) CG characters as youngin's... gotta love it. <P>What I don't get is that now the flashback is over and we see... Kirby bringing gifts to Erik and apoligizing to the guy who cheated on his girlfriend (and essentially cheated on his best friend as well as Cyn) instead of comforting Cyn who actually called him up to come over and talk?????<P>????<P><img src="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/icons/icon2.gif" align="left"> <B>'Da Falcon</B>
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Postby Killerbean on Sat Nov 09, 2002 7:35 pm

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Postby Wil B on Tue Aug 05, 2003 4:43 am

Killerbean wrote:. . . o S


eh...right
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