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PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 11:33 am
by Balfegor
Ah, couldn't see it until a moment ago.<P>It's a pretty nice pic. The upper body looks good. And that's a nice solid neck. Not like those wimpy, stick-thin manga necks <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspot.com/KeenBoard/wink.gif"><P>If I had to point out one area to concentrate on, though, it would be the hips and the lower body. In your image, your hips just come straight off the torso. There's some overlap, since (from the orientation of the breasts and the feet) the body is turned slightly. Imagine two balls (the buttocks) coming off towards two other balls (the knees) with two elongated balls between them (the thighs).<P> <IMG SRC="http://www3.hmc.edu/~ajensen/Btu-ed.jpg"> <P>Tried showing that here. Encoded at low quality, so it might not be clear. Also, the feet are a wee bit off-looking, but then, no one really cares about feet. And I've seen feet that looked more or less like that, anyhow. They looked odd in RL too, though. -_-<P>Keep drawing for us!<P>-Tae

PostPosted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 6:16 am
by gwalla
I recommend not using the paint bucket tool for coloring grayscale-scanned drawings.<P>------------------
"My work here is done...
I go now, to mess with the Watchmen..."<P> - Darryl a.k.a. the Kingdom Come Baby, "Age of Crisis on Infinite Clones Saga - Chapter One Million: Onslaught of the Secret Genesis Wars Agenda", <I>Plastic Man Special '99</I>